Naruto System Within Naruto 33 Chapter 33 : An Superior S Class Jutsu!!

Linley tried again and again only to fail.... the b.a.l.l.s exploded in his hands hurting him in the process as it was with much more packed up chakra than the water b.a.l.l.s....

Soon the 4th day had arrived and he didn't have any progress on the leather b.a.l.l.s.... he was totally down... both mentally and physically....

After all, he was six years old..... even if he had powerful bloodlines it was still way too exhausted to do all this...

He fell on the ground asleep yet again with Tsunade being his guard till he wakes up..... in his mind he started reviewing everything he knew so far, in hopes of a solution for his self-created Jutsu...

Let's see I took reference from Son Goku.... in his Kamehame wave and managed to rotate in the water b.a.l.l.s.... what am I missing?? : Linley

As he thought hard about it after a few seconds he was jolted....

Wait... what if i.... start rotating them the moment the first element is inserted inside the leather ball.... then match its speed and insert the second and so on..... : Linley

As he started to simulating if it will work 10 hours pa.s.sed and finally his body waked up..... he started immediately his new theories on what he thought...

Surprising enough it was way easier now to smoothly enter chakra inside the ball.... and when it reached it's limit the ball burst revealing a chakra ball with five coloured rings before dissipating.....

Tsunade who was hiding was stunned... what was that ball?? Linley then moved towards the rubber b.a.l.l.s and took 1 in order to test his new method...

He did the same thing he did in the leather ball... but he found it a tad difficult to burst it.... if he remember correctly in this step he needed power right??

Therefore he cancelled his chakra and after waiting for a bit he tried again.... this time with double the amount.....

When he insert the 5th element inside and started rotating rapidly the ball burst and between his two hands that laid back in his waist as if he was ready to fire a Kamehameha wave..... a light Blue chakra rotating ball appeared and was surround it by 5 rings with different colours... 1 green, 1 brown, 1 deep blue, 1 red and 1 dark white.....

Those rings were not on top of each other creating something like a disk, but next to each other perfectly aling in gaps between them....

He felt his Jutsu being stable and wanted to try it... to see its power.... therefore he dashed forward a few walls of rocks.... Tsunade watched this with much interest to see the effects of it....

The moment he reached the walls he fired his hands like a Kamehameha in the walls..... what happened next was out of their wildest dreams....

When the ball touched the walls all rings got sucked inside the ball as it expanded by 5 times over its colour changed to purple and got fired in a single line in fronts of him like a shotgun making a huge hole in the walls and everything it pa.s.sed through...

Anything the almost 60 cm Purple chakra ball touched vanished completely..... and around the area of the hole in its edges.... you could see traces of flames... being wet..... small cuts..... a few cracks and a few parts becoming sand....

Holy sh....t!!!! how far did the ball go???? : Linley

The same question popped up in Tsunade's mind and they started following in a straight line the hole..... from one side you could see a bit of light in the other side, therefore they knew that it went past the small rocks valley and reached the other side of the faces...

After a few minutes, they were shocked..... they measured the distance from when it was fired and where it reached and it was close 1.000 meters...

Linley and Tsunade at that moment wanted to laugh because the ball before dissipating made a hole in the center of the 3rd Hokage's forehead..... making him looked like an Indian in Linley's past life...

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Authors Note :

Thank you all for helping me fix a bit of the rating in my stories.... I'll be honest I don't really care about the rankings and I'm not asking for stones, I know there are many much more decent stories than mine and I'm not fighting for a rank..... I simply write my own fantasies and versions of my stories.... I know my English sucks and probably I'll never fix that as I don't have the knowledge I need to write better.... my only desire is to write whatever I like, and for you guys to pa.s.s a bit of your time..... I will never delete any of my works as I would feel I lost many hours of my life, and long as I think it's decent I'll post it..... I'll always try to repay my debts and when I have free time a few bonuses....

As thanks for helping me, I will speed type... and kill myself so that I can double Naruto and Dan Machi for the next 7 days until the next Monday.... of course, if I have time I will add Bonus...

And please take note that my timeframe cause I'm searching for a job in order to have a stable income is a bit f.u.c.ked up......